Monday, August 2, 2021

Micahś holiday

 

Today I was learning to do paragraphs

I enjoyed writing about my holiday

I found it challenging to thinking about my holiday

My digital learning object shows to do paragraphs

Next time I would change my writing

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  1. IndiaAugust 3, 2021 at 10:28 AM

    Kia ora Micah
    My name is India and I am in Room 9 at St Mary’s School in Gisborne.

    I really liked your hook sentence.
    I learned that your dad stepped on you. That must have hurt.
    Maybe you could add a little more detail.

    From India.

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